wow, im speechless...there is so much raw emotion...

i love the last line...

im adding this to my faves, im very impressed by this!

much-o LUB~kerr~

not much of a reviewer..but good job.

I've noticed that a lot of your poems (though they are very good) are rather scathing. They seem to drip with venom, like they are aimed at someone that you really hate. WD

wow i loved that! every line was just so harsh, so true, so deep ... and i loved how you broke them into really short lines ... beautiful writing. amazing ... and the last time? it changed the entire feel of the poem i went back and read it again. all i can say is it's haunting. it's real. i applaud you for that. this has got to be one of my favourite poems i've ever seen on this site. and i never put poetry on my fav list, but this is going on. it has to. exceptional job!
~k8

Wow... i totally understand that whole thing. This one girl turned me Emo a thousand ** years ago, and she still ends up being all i write about. Anyway, i got this...

Very emotional and i think that many people would agree with you that after someone broke up with them they felt empty and dark.

A very powerful poem. I like the last line. It changes your prospective of the prior lines. Another words Excellent Poem.

...wow...very emotional...r/r me i would love for such a talented writer to opinionate on mine...even if u hate em or not...

My favourite lines

The extra mile
Unwalked
The extra lengths
Not gone to
The extra yards
Not fought for

... this is very well written. Once again something I could completely relate to. Well done...

This poem made me feel so sad. It also makes me really woder who your writing about or if there's any one at all. I really loved it.

When I read this poem, I didn't know what to expect. But while I was reading it, I found myself re-living past feelings, re-seeing myself lying in my own dark corner of my mind, wishing I could escape, but my body not responding. I read this poem and it helped me to see, that I am not the only one that gets these feelings, feelings of taking over the world, but then not acting upon any of my ambitions. Thank you for writing this poem...you have given me a light, now if only I can find a hold on my life.

i love this, dark and forbidding, yet sounds so true. i wanted to review 'Enough' bt you said not to so i thought i would obay your wishes, but i can't, that poem as well was amazing. you have so much talent.

~*~erika~*~

(if you dont mind i am on a small mission, after a friend told my my work was so bad she did't think ANYONE would review it. and i want to prove her wrong by getting as many reviews as humanly possible. please if you have the time review as much or little of my work as you see fit and all reviews, useful and flames, are welcomed. thanks even if you dont)

Thats how I feel when I hear country music. I want to destroy the world for a single person listening to it. I think cruel and terrible thoughts. Especially when I am forced to listen to it. Very descriptive. Very nice poem. Well, not nice, but yah, stuff.

Wow. That's darker than me. I'm a suicidal\biopolar maniac and that's darker that me. I once wrote an almost poem that said I hate you four times in a row and was very dark, but I had been listening to Korn's "Falling away from Me". I never published it.
I didn't even know who I was hating. I just don't like a lot of people. Don't take sabbaticals unless you plan never to return.

Life Sucks. I know.

I love it. It's so beautiful, so true.. It makes me want to scream and break things. Thumbs up, wonderful. I love ALL of your work! you're going on my favorites list.