|Reviews for Cold Mistrust|
| aquamoon222 2/26/05 . chapter 1
A very rare and beautiful poem. Very bitter. It really says alot about what you've gone through. I can sadly relate. I especially love the strong descriptive word choice.
| Naruke 7/13/03 . chapter 1
Outer self: did that person stab you?
Inner self: no, you idiot! he just betrayed her! (you are a she and the person youre talking about is a guy, right?)
| Keep it 100 7/10/03 . chapter 1
Short, but this was intense. You presented some good images to get your point across.
Heart of the Sword
| Bekll 7/8/03 . chapter 1
Eh. That sends a chill up my soul. It's deep and powerfully vivid and sickening.
It's rated G?
| rosepetal1077 6/17/03 . chapter 1
| Obliquity 6/4/03 . chapter 1
| Ukiah 4/2/03 . chapter 1
I like this one, very powerful and descriptive in how painful it is to lose any trust you placed in a close friend.
Something terrible must've happened to bring it to this point.
| axania chic 2/26/03 . chapter 1
o powerful really angry good poem really good
| Evelyn Hayden 2/2/03 . chapter 1
I love your poems, they're so great, deep, and awsome
| triskaidekaphobia 1/27/03 . chapter 1
Oooh the imagery there is powerful
| kamikaze899 1/24/03 . chapter 1
great poem! really nice.
| Knife Fighter 1/22/03 . chapter 1
thats goooood... to put it mildly
i know what that feels like...
| Crispy 1/18/03 . chapter 1
| the Queen of Jupiter 1/11/03 . chapter 1
Excellent imagery, very chilling. I can relate to this a lot, so it just makes the poem all the more vivid.
Keep writing! Peace
| not sure yet 1/8/03 . chapter 1
another painful one, but i really love this one though, short, but says a lot, and expresses your anguish beautifully