i really like it. i no someone exactly like that.

Well written, the rhyme scheme compliments the overall meaning. Incidentally: Damn you have a lot of people reviewign your stuff *-oggles-* O_o Oh dear, I feel insignifigant. In any case, I am rather new and I am trying to... well... make a name for myself. I have been doing fairly well but am trying to get ahold of some of the bigwigs around here to really get my name out there. If you have the time, it would be sincerely appreciated if you could drop by my site and let me know what you think. Thank you for your time and have a wonderful day.

Wow... did this really happen? I should hope not... It's a great poem, but so sad...

i like it, i understand what u mean and where u are coming from

i'm young yet... never had this happen... but it's sad... and a nice poem of expression... like it...
baibai>yukie

::wipes a tear:: I have never have that happen to me and to god I hope it doesn't.

That's sad but, good poem.

well, i certainly like this as a poem. But I'm a guy and don't really get the plot. I mean, if your done with someone, everyone else would have an equal right to make their move on that person. Wow. That sounded kinda gay comin' from a guy. Anyway. That's my opinion. Or maybe I'm just stupid...
-Jack
(One of the Members of the Dynamic Quartet of Pennamessuck Inc.)

yea people suck sometimes dont they?? everyone makes mistakes...it just hurts alot when they do sometimes...

I went back and read all the reviews... and it seems as if this really did happen to you.
What can I say? Ouch? Like you care what some person out there thinks. You just wanted to get this out of you, and maybe you do care about responses... from certain people.
So let me say, rather than I hope you got your revenge on whoever did this, I hope you and that person made up. And got over it.

That really happened to you? Because if that did, your friend is one sad excuse for a person. That is just a shame. Well, when things like this happen you get to see people's true colors. But anyways, that was an awesome poem.

oo ouch, that can't have been nice, people can turn out to be such ** at times.

Ouch, is this from personal experience? Great poem, get's across how friends can stab you in the back. It's happened to me too often.

Keep writing, love your style!
Rose x

Very sad. It's horrible when someone you thought you trust betray you.

Really said, and you can feel the pain. Great wording, awesome job

~Jess