as always, perfect in every way.

~*Lauren*~

A bit redundant, but what can I say, this is great stuff. I really don't care about school tomorrow, even if it's midnight, I gotta read these all.

TOTALLY ROCKS! I looooove the ending. Would you mind checking out my songs?

Beautiful... The love/hate thing going on in here is amazing... I adore it. Absolutely!

... Yet again, I'm amazed at your lyrical prowess. I think you need to get a record deal, because I would SOOO buy an album with these songs on it. It's just so easy to identify with your songs.

The chorous almost feels unfinished, cut-off, but that's just me, heh. Nice song though, great descriptions and expressions of emotions in the piece. Good job

-Jessie