damn it babes... your colors, well they're beautiful, and if 'blissin' out seems to be a phrase that catches your attention ... well then i've flown to the hills and back again... see you tomarrow... i shall be the one half dressed with a rose in my hair
the lover

I adored the use of color, and the word choice hit me hard. But oh, honey. You're a better writer then that. Finish the piece. A dreamy wake up ending is a cop out, and you know it. tsk tsk.

(I know, I know, the whole point was that she was in the froot loops bowl, but still, that's no excuse for wasting good prose. tsk again.)

that is great, i love it. very funny. i meant to say that laura was funny too, but the stupid thing wont let me put up more than one review.

I only caught two similes. the one of a freaked out invalid, and the one of the biological stain.

I can see why your teacher would doubt your insanity, though.

That is cool, call me weird - i like the freaked out invalid part and then I like the end, drowning in fruit loops can do that to you.

Beyond help - yes.
But its good to be crazy, the most creative people are insane. And its fun when people doubt your sanity...or even doubt its exsitance.

whats so great about being sane!?

hmm yAY i like. i think you showed me this at school....hmmmm

OH THE INSANITY!!!! AAAAHHHHH HELP!!! Very funny. Did you actually right that for English? MORE!!!

Okay, that was weird. Reminds me of the time when the milk was half-frozen and it was all in a pile on top of my bowl of Cheerios...