I really like this story! It's great!

This is good...like most of your stories ;; I like this one quite a bit. It could use a bit more work with tense consistency and a bit of grammar editing, but otherwise it's quite good _ Keep up the good work.

do you manage to write so many freaking stories and get them all to be freaking INTERESTING?

I like ths story. little slow at reading it but, hey

ok, now im typing this review for the second time. yes i hate ff at moments. your story's great with a *small* cliffhanger to finish it off.P

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I liked this btw. :D

-Azalai

Wow...cliffhanger! Nice start to your story...continue please?

Grrrrrrrrrr...another one. It's great.