Aw! This is soo sad. It made me want to cry. I hate sad endings, and the way you ended it. It was really touching. Sarah finding her little sister and having her die in her arms. That is one of the worst things in life and having it be an accident. You (or Anne) are right, no one should ever die that way.

... why did anne die? (sounds stupid i know) but... why does the last line go "It was just an accident. I could see anything." ? or am I supposed to fiqure this out on my own? *bearhugs*

excellent. My friend committed Suicide...very powerful and realistic.
You have inspired me.
Please take a look at my story "Regret?"
thanks!

wow, that was an impact. well, i think that was a great story. but, one thing, was the last part supposed to be, i couldnt, or i could?