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| 'super-funki-girl' 2007-03-01 ch 10,  | abusegood work! its lovli...i hope you get to the next chapter soon! |
| kimper 2006-10-08 ch 10, anon. | abuseYou've got a really great story going here. I hope you decide to continue it :) |
| Shadow of the Black Wolf 2006-06-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is good so far. I think I've read a story like this. The kid who's in the streets is really rich and if it's like the other story I read, I know exactly what happens and that would suck!! |
| in darkness we glow 2006-04-03 ch 5, | abuse. |
| in darkness we glow 2006-04-03 ch 6, | abuseii rlly like this story its exiting plz continuee :) |
| Empress 2006-04-03 ch 6, anon. | abuseCheck up on google 'What I Did For Love' by Val. Your summary is awfully similar to what happened in that story. Good luck on this story. |
| rachelle 2006-03-13 ch 10, anon. | abuse... this is really well written... i just hope that callum and yana find some peace, i wish that they will... happy endings - im a sucker for those. |
| jenthecaliforniagirl2004 2006-03-03 ch 10, | abuseI can't wait until you post the next chapter! Great story! |
| =] 2006-02-10 ch 10, anon. | abuseI know!A social worker is coming.Am I right?I think I read something like that where the 'mother' gave the kid food and clothes and stuff so it looked like she'd changed and then he would be good by the social worker.Hm.I think that was from A Child Called It.I dunno. |
| ShadowYellowEyes 2006-02-07 ch 10, | abuseI like the pacing of the story. Not too fast, and not too slow, and the parts with the guy (what's his name? I can never remember names) definitely are more about the exposition (or at least when he's thinking to himself) than the plot, but things like that are necessary. I'm interested in where this will go. ^_^ Patiently waiting. ~Shadow |
| ellecee 2005-07-11 ch 10, | abuseI really, really, really wish you'd write some more. This story is incredible. You can't stop here. |
| ellecee 2005-07-09 ch 6, | abuseThis story is amazing. |
| antipathy 2005-04-18 ch 3, | abuseWow. I love how the plot's progressing so far. |
| mwegan 2005-04-13 ch 4, | abuseVery well written, great descriptions. Interesting using the present tense. There are a few times where the POV character addresses the reader, and it seems a bit out of place to me (example "I push my hand against my forehead trying to push it away. Realisation hits me. Do you know what she'll do to me?") Anyway, I will read on... |
| BlackOleander 2004-12-13 ch 10, | abuseBlah. I thought He Punks Me Not was the least updated story on here that I actually like, but I guess not. :O You haven't updated in.. in.. over half a year! Luckily, I'm a new reader and haven't had to wait for seven whole months pulling my hair out and wondering what's going to happen next. But if you don't update soon, then I will be doing that, and you don't want me to become bald, do you? So for my hair's sake, pleeasee update. ^^ Oh yeah.. I almost forgot. I really like the story. XD But Callum and Yana need to start interacting a bit more. |