Oh, so sad... written very well and I like how it coincides with the poem. Good job!

Hey, i just wanted to say that i love this story, i don't know if its fiction or not an i dont want to know i just wanted to say it moved me very much an although your intentions were probably not this it made me cry for the first time ina long time. so thanks. You can respond to this if you'd like but i dunno, thanks once again.Sincearly,Katie Rose

I liked the way you broke up the poem and wrote a story for it. It's really beautiful and very emotional. Wonderful job.

Really touching. A very nice way to honor a wonderful person.

That was a beautiful adaptation of the poem into a story...really, truly, beautiful. Your imagery is excellent, as is your use of words. I liked the way you put in the poem in small pieces throughout the story...better than just chunking at the front, as people sometimes do. I love the poem, and so I knew [kind of] what was going to happen. But you still surprised me, and I liked that. Anyway, I can't say "good job" any more, in any new ways. So...good job. And now, I'll be on my merry way. :)

OMG! im so sorry! Gosh ive got tears in my eyes! When I read one of your storys i really liked it but didnt leave a review because i wanted to check out your other storys you wrote i saw this one 1st because it had no review "history" and i thought if im gonna write a review it misewell be for a story that dosnt have a review, so i read it and the top of my tee-shirt is soacked in tears. Im not much of a writer myself but i do read all the time, and my opion my not count but this really is one of the best storys that i have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!! As well is my best friends wedding these are the only two that i have read so far but im gonna check out your other storys. I'm sorry for your lose (how do you spell that???). You really are a great writer keep it up, but you dont need me to tell you that hu? lol

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