I liked all the imagery for this poem, especially the "cardboard princess". The whole piece made me smirk. And I'm fond of your use of brackets. I'm glad you don't over-use them in the pieces I have seen thus far. You're a really sarcastic writer- I can't tell whether this frightens me or intrigues me. Fair enough. Good piece.

I liked this a lot. Sometimes I wonder if humans just created time for lack of anything better to do...But then I realize that it doesn't make physical sense...