I love how you describe the events that took place. Crystal bears the same name I do, that may be what kept me reading (I generally stay away from stories about hookers). However, I am not a **. Girls, like Marysia, who kick butt and are not wimps are always fun to read about, if written by a skilled hand.

BTW, I believe that dying is spelt with a 'y' and not like 'dieing.'