Hm...not sure I get the poem entirely, but it's okay. Doesn't really hit me any particular way... I think I'm in an apathetic mood right now.

Izzy J.

It flows really well, I like the second stanza the best. It would flow even better if you changed the last two lines to "A thousand reasons why I would/Give all to be your lover." That way the lines are a more even length.

Btw, this is the last poem I'm reviewing for now, giving so many reviews drains me, and bad things happen when I get drained.

Sabbrielle