FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Hopes Forgotten 2003-01-06 ch 1,  | abuseThat's good, I like it. When I started reading it I didn't like it as much as I did when I finsihed, I think you could have done the begining a bit better but that's just me. In any case it's better then anything I've ever wrote. |
| Boba Fett 2003-01-06 ch 1, | abuseDude Poop! |