 Firestorm 2006-05-17 . chapter 1 Amusingly similer to some words of mine in parts.
Everyone is silently screaming, and almost everyone, including themselves, cannot hear it.
The reality of hearing silent screaming all about you, whenever you open your eyes to see someone's face, to see anything someone does, to see what has happened to bring all of us to this point in life, in time, will make you want to scream your throat dry, to forget, to leave, to hide, to cease to be.
It can destroy your will to live.
So it is better to not see, to an extent, and to not hear.
That you are not paralyzed by an echo of this is a testement to who you are. |
 C. Hoogkamer 2003-06-23 . chapter 1im truly at a loss for words here. this is an amazing piece, i like it alot. one thing though, near the ending, the rhyming seemed a bit forced, which can take away from a poem. overall though good work and plz plz keep writing
~dArLiN69~ |
 Angel Nazi 2003-02-22 . chapter 1not only was that long long long long long, but really really good! I loved the line "This "God" won't listen to every one's plea" it was totaly brill, i think that this poem had so much feeling an so much emotion! it was really good, an inspired me to write again!
Angel Nazi ^_^ |