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underjoyed
2004-11-01
ch 1,
abuseI did think she was gonna kill herself, and I desperately didn't want her to, just because I expected it. I was very happy when I read the actual ending :) I like the way it was written, sort of fragmented and disjointed at times. It definitely captured the instability and the way she's slightly off-kilter.
You're good, girl. You're good.
Jewel
2003-08-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseactually- when u said 'the instrement' I didn't know what to think. It sounded like she was actually about to commit suicide. Hm... is this the extremely EXAGERATED me? Jus' wondering if the little dear was inspiredish by me complaining 'bout my hw... (not that I'm trying to be braggish- jus' curious! I dun mean to sound self obssesed!) anyhow... I'm glad she's not u! I'm glad u're not that mentally unstable. ^.^ Good job! keep writting Lira-chan dear!
Maaaaaary
2003-03-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, that was GOOD. I mean, depressing, but GOOD. I mean, that's was suspense (the pressure was building in my ears... was that too much information?) I LIKE this story! ^_^
-smart ignorance... blissful posi?
sidly
2003-02-22
ch 1,
abuseI didn't really catch the whole "insane" thing or even suicidal.A little deranged though, which proves my brain isn't *totally* friend. I do like her though, I can relate to thoughtspeaks neverending about school.
Aftertaste of a Razorblade
2003-01-09
ch 1,
abuseVery cool.

I could tell what was happening. I like the character you've got here--she's obviously not mentally sound, but at the same time, she doesn't come off as being *completely* off the deep end. Somewhere in between.

Like I said, very cool.
Angelic Hooligan
2003-01-09
ch 1,
abuseCool. Reminds me of me, except I wouldn't have confessed and I'm not a diligent student, but I am mentally unstable. Go figure. Anyways, this was good. I liked it.
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