this is such a sweet story~ i wish it was longer though :)
I'm glad that Chayse pick Kelly because honestly I just can't stand Danny. There wasn't great chemistry between the two of them. I was getting more of Kelly and Chayse vibe! hoho
Danny is a jerk and Chayse was probably in love with the idea of him, being all dangerous and flirtatious. I am for Kelly, right from the beginning.
And was I relieved? About the patients mix up :)

Favouriting this! Great job!
-retronadya

Oh my gosh! This story is so funny! I mean, Bianca's last name - every time I see it I have to say it out loud and then I crack up!

By the way, I also just finished Half Way to forever and forgot to review - it was AWESOME! I love time travel stories and I hope you are able to publish it.

You are one of the better writers I've found on this site.

very Sweet, been reading this the 4th time :)

LOVE IT!!

Whoa. This story was over before I even knew it. But I liked it a lot. I especially love the title of this story, and Kelly, and the way that you completely turned the whole flirtatious, dark, sexy bad boy image around and made him out to be exactly the type of person that he appears to be. I thought that was pretty unique, and refreshing, so yeah I'm definitely glad that Chayse ended up with Kelly instead of Danny :) He was really the one who actually cared, and honestly seeing Kelly interacting with Danny, and even Max, makes me wonder how the hell the three of them have been friends for so long, if you're just gonna so easily put your job before your friend and arrest him, or if you're gonna poke fun at your friend's illness when he has a series disease. Wtf. Friends?

I just noticed it but it's kind of funny how if you switch Kelly & Chayse's names, well I mean, Kelly sounds like a girl's name and Chayse sounds like a boy's name :p Devin is just plain stupid. Haha the doctor mix up was funny. And I love the ending. This story is so sweet :) Kelly's little confession at the end there reminds me a lot of "you had me at hello." Lol.

I wish you would update your sequel thing for this too. I'm not sure what it is, but I think I'll check it out even though it's incomplete and you probably have no plans to continue it :( Anyways, great job with this story! It was fun and lighthearted. Annd Kelly just kills me he's so sweet - especially when he said he liked her hair better before. I kind of died. Lol. I wonder how Chayse ever paid off that credit card bill...

Please keep writing cute stories like this!

-- Alyssa

This story was really good. Your very talented.

This is a great story! I'm surprised it hasn't gotten more attention on fictionpress.
I see that Designs is one of your older stories, [I thought I'd post a review anyway] so I'm not sure if a critique is necessary; your writing has probably already improved.
But just in case, the only area improvement in writing that I noted was in character development. You mentioned in your last A/N that you'd like to elaborate on Max. Maybe some Chayse-Max scenes would bring out the character more. And Bonnie's a good candidate for added description, too.
The landlord was GREAT, though. I love how you brought him to life.

I'm looking forward to reading some more of your stuff.
I see that all of your Humor/Romance works are on hold. It's too bad! You have a great sense of humor, and it blends wonderfully with the romance--it makes for great chik lit! I'd love to read some more!

Best of Luck!

Kelly, without a doubt, is the best :) I know a guy like him...Man, I love that guy to death!Anyway, awesome story so far.Mel

oh this story was so funny and sweet! you did a really great job on it!

^_._^

Hah. Ok so this is going to be for the whole story!

I love it so much!! It totally rocked!! I hate Danny's character, like Max and I love Kelly!! And Chayse!! Man you're such a good writer I loved it so much :] I also loved your description about Bianca crying and how you cry, I'm like that too! But I get splotches on my face and red eyed, it's not pretty haha. Great work though!

OMG, the end of this chapter was so funny! Hahahaha! Poor Chayse, poor Kelly.

YES! this story is awesome. right to the heart of every woman's dreams. A policeman, a construction worker AND a firefighter. Could it get any better than that? We'll see. Thanks for writing what I've been living my whole life for ;-)

This rocks!

omg! you MUST make a sequel lol. please this is such a cute story, really is. i love how you make kelly and chayse fall in love, and maybe add a bit of spice to it all ;) haha. but overall, excellent story. really adorable!

Wow, wow! I loved it! Though I'm upset that I've only just staggered across this piece. I laughed out loud at lots of bits, Chayse's comebacks to Devin about how he doesn't spend so much time in the bedroom, and the delivery men! Classic! I can really see this as a tv comedy or something! It was so good! So so so so so so good!