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| PainKiller 2003-07-18 ch 1,  | abuseIt's true.. this world is mostly cruel. But there are some lights in the darkness. There are a few puncuation and spelling errors you should probably fix. Otherwise, it's great! |
| ShadowWalker1514 2003-02-20 ch 1, | abuseI so love this poem. My motto is that everybody sees things diffrently and i would say that this poem was so raw, so to the bone! |
| Poet of Emotions 2003-02-02 ch 1, anon. | abusejeez, and the sad part of that is, it's true, if you think about it. THere are some nice people out there, but there are SO many horrible people. And that's really sad, it's only the human beasts. Great write, like I said you should really go to that site, you'd fit in perfectly! ^_~ Hehe! great job, loved it, ::yawns:: me must sleep now, nighters! I'll make sure to add ya to me favs later, me too lazy right now. night, ta! LUCK! ~Steph |
| Youkai Author 2003-01-23 ch 1, | abuseYou are a very good poet. This is a very good poem. I liked it ^-^ |
| Karbini27 2003-01-10 ch 1, | abuseSorry, don't mean to be cruel, but this is a little on the average side for you, I know you have some really good stuff. |