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| this grl 2004-04-13 ch 1, anon. | abusehey i liked ur poem ... its all meeh ... well juss leavin u some props on ur poem ... very good |
| NuMbGrl-15 2004-03-16 ch 1,  | abuseI'm a cutter and i know how it feels! you did I nice job! sam |
| KatyGirl1219 2003-10-29 ch 1, | abuseI self-injure, as well. This is a great poem; I can fully identify with it and love the manor in which it was written. Never forget to take care of you. ::hugs:: |
| Shadafakup 2003-07-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is great.. Honestly.. I thought it sounded like prose in poetry form but when I reread it I thought differently.. Interestin.. It has this cool ringin to it.. Good structure, and the flow of the poem was nicely done too.. Great job with expression too.. |
| suicidel angel 2003-04-29 ch 1, | abusewow! i'm speechless, brilliant poem! |
| OptimisticRomantic 2003-03-10 ch 1, | abuseWhoa! Very deep Very good. I liked it. You really explained why you do it. And the pain you feel. It was really good. ~Sandra~ |
| Sarny 2003-02-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI don't want to know how many F-writers know things like cutting, anorexia, bulimia and else from expirience. Seems like it's quite inspiring. I use to write the same words - "Hilf mir, rette mich" (hold me, love me)- but do you know WHO shall come? For I'm am bit lost. |
| Pound 2003-02-02 ch 1, | abusegood rhythm... not as morbid as most SI poems. i really like that even though i don't mind morbid. think it would be beautiful to a non-cutter too, but its hard remember what that's like. i love it keep writing. |
| Chibiheartdragon 2003-01-26 ch 1, | abuseLovely poem! (Lol, that was a short review) |
| Raija D. 2003-01-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseOoh, love the rhyming style..I think there was a word for that, but I don't remember. Yes! Is good poem, as you surely know. I like it! It's happy! For me, but then I am surely insane. |
2003-01-12 ch 1, anon. | abusei love your poem i wanna learn to write poetry like that... |
| Lina Inverse 2003-01-11 ch 1, | abuseAh... The life of a cutter. I know it as well as you... |
| Guenevere 2003-01-11 ch 1, | abuseWow.. I'm just speechless.. 9/10 |
| Namir Swiftpaw 2003-01-11 ch 1, | abuseWow. This was fricken awesome. It's going on my favorite's list. I really like the way it was written and presented. Excellent work. Keep writing. ~Namir Swiftpaw |
| EJWeir 2003-01-11 ch 1, | abuseMarvellous! It's very deep. I hope it's not from personal experience- if so, you should really seek help. I'm getting therapy myself- check out my poem. |