that was amazing and i could relate to it exactly down to every last detail especially the last oaragraph. awesome.

Honestly? Well, I prefer writing in which the protagonist and/or antagonist are introduced; where there are names in which I can associate with the personalities revealed in the story. But as a monologue it is pretty nice. Definitely something everyone can relate to.
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I think maybe a bit more could be added on to the end, but that's just me *shrugs* Well written though, nice monologue. And something I can relate to all too well, heh. Great job