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chibighost 2003-02-12 . chapter 2
O-O I think it's good so far! It's really cool that your brother draws manga. I've been trying lately, and they've turned out...ok? I'll have to say so far that my favorite character is (C) Kaiju Kendou! He sounds interesting! You take Latin? (that's what you said in your review) How neat! Me too! We're learning about the chariot races as a little side unit right now. Verbs give me a huge headache. I always get so confused between (for example) vocabat, vocabit, vocabemus, vocaverunt...yada yada. Verbs like debeo, moneo, ect. are wrose. Ow...my head. Anyway, write more please!
Talvaigo 2003-01-21 . chapter 2
(C) Thanks for review my story!First time I typed it half of it didn't show up!Anyhow,keep going...I hope you don't kill Kaiju,he sounds cool........

_-_Dark Mew_-_
(I don't bite *sly grin*)
Akio 2003-01-13 . chapter 2
Reviews, reviews! Gotta love 'em!

It's good. A nice setup and intro. I can't wait for the next chapter.

It's too bad, really. I thought I'd be able to keep a unique name...

Oh, and by the way, I'm voting "B" on your poll (betcha saw that one comming) even though I don't like the sound of "I have a plan for whichever character gets the most votes!"

Keep up the good work!

P.S: Believe it or not, I actually don't have vampire-like attributes.

~Akio~
Artemis1000 2003-01-12 . chapter 2
That's really an interesting prologue, I hope you'll update quickly. It's difficult to pick a favourite character having only gotten to know them and they all sound like a fascinating bunch, but for the moment I like Kaiju Kendou (C) best.
Psychiatric Poet 2003-01-12 . chapter 1
::looks at post::

::blush::

You'll have to excuse my spelling and typos on that, my keyboard buttons dont work sometimes, encluding delete. Note the 'confusioning' anyway I'm off.

Once again great work.

::wanders off::

Law [I sometimes go to my own little world, but that's okay, they know me there.]
Psychiatric Poet 2003-01-12 . chapter 2
I like this allot, I do find it a bit confusioning but thts properly just me and my limited understanding of other peoples work, esspecially when theres more han one two people. It seems strang, thee beings so different, but somehow connected through their understanding.

Keep up the great work, you have a talent.

Thanks fo the review on 'Raw'

Law [I am at one with my duality.]
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