WOW! You updated...awesome.

Update when you can!

well, yeah we where a bit winded you changed the entire backdrop, though you also changed the relationship between andrea and men in this chapter, if i remember wasnt she abused on the beach once as a child and feared men but shes still got spunk... oh well if you dont include it then you dont but i still cant wait for the next chapter! keep on writing! ^_^

i'm lost, is "new world" before "moon chronicles" or the other way?
and when is andrea gonna come into the picture?
it so doesnt help that i read the old version quite sometime ago...=.=
lovin how this chapter seems promising, but i'm still utterly confused
who is james? is he a new character, or do i hav a bad memory[which is totally possible, i can barely remember what i ate last night ;P]
keep working on the story!

This story's quite annoying on a few points.

The things that happen... ehh. Your words are nice, but, there's just something that doesn't appeal to me. I guess I was expecting a LOT when I started reading. A funny time, the girl moving in, lots of cute scenes and quarrels, etc. That's why you're supposed to read with no expectations at all, eh. :S

Not what I had in mind. Not that I WANT it to be predictable, but still... there's only so much a girl can handle.

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I don't remember if Andrea ever told Neo her name... unless, he doesn't know her name, but he's referring to her as such as that we don't get confused and you're putting her name there blah blah. Yeps. Can't remember at all... I searched, or tried to. T_T

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I hope Neo doesn't have any physical problems... that'd be so sad. It's sad enough -- so close, yet so far! ~~

Kinda annoyed that there are no breaks between the scene changes, but ehh. We'll see.

I have a lot to comment on, but I didn't click to review the chapter, so I got lazy... -_-

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I was wondering where the mother was, too. Then again, what sane father in their right mind would hand over his DAUGHTER to a GUY, especially a SCHOOL full of THEM. O_O

Aww, Ethan. No, not that, it's just... *sniffs* It's my favorite name. I'm trying to detach myself so I don't make assumptions, haha. Okay, they're just names, not the same people, *whisperwhisper*.

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Aww, Andrea freaked out before know ALL the details... and before knowing ALL the details, she's already mad, so once she knew ALL the details... I'm being redundant.

Cutting a girl's long hair is a big deal. :S I'm excited, ehhe! This is going to be fun...

> > > ...I see that my daughter is the only person who can watch your son and protect him with everything she's got.
Lmao, I think that line's hilarious!

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i still can't figure out where this plot is going, but i sure as hell am interested in it. the budding love, albeit akward, is AWESOME!
great job
-kemi

wow, i am SO hooked on this fiction

i luved the ride ...

I. Love. It. nuff said.

hmm..this was a fun lil' story to read. I'm interested to see where the next bit is going. Good luck on finishing shcool; I konw how rough it can be >.

Damn. Yaoi kind of turns me off.

Very good story though!