*GASP
o.m.g.
I CANT READ CHAPTER 9! *GASP
ok i can read up to when marcus gets hit. but ... I DIDN"T GET TO READ THE KISSING PART! *GASPS
HOW SAD IS THAT!?!?!?!??!?!?!? :(
can u plz send me chapter 9?? plz?? coz for some reason my comp cant access it, and that means i miss out on the important part!! :(
plz?? ur story is awesome *thumbs up

... i seriously don't think that luxembourg could really fight France, it's like a hundredth of the size, about 51 miles across max. -.- they have maybe two airports. lol jk, i looked it up. so it has exactly two airports and one of them's unpaved.

...do you wish you were alex? someone should.

wow, i can only listen to america insults twice before i go like "how dare yo." blah blah blah and in a southern/militant accent and i'm first generation american too, so sad.

go go power rangers :3

...of course it made sense besides the fact that /every/thing was transparent or see-through.

um, are they going to turn into power rangers? i don't get the color thing yet.

u kno until u left of the last s in sais i had no idea what u were talking about. on that note it's sai swords or sai style of fighting. the swords themselves are not called sais. i thought u might have known that seeing as u do some form of martial arts. w/ever. and while i'm at it, sophia has got to be the single most nausea-inducing cliche of a character ever thought up. i just had to say it. i have no idea why u wanted to demean ur story with her but w/ever. i'm not fond of charcaters that talk in too many exclamation points. everything else so far is hella cool. nice ideas and whatnot.

erm...and assasin that thinks it's wrong to kill? why didn't he just get a job at a bakery? sorry, i didn't mean that to be as rude as it sounded >_< where are the other two parts to this?

Why did you end it like that! I hate you *currently in tears* You made Nicholas kill or almost kill him! You had better mak a sequel with Alexander alive and breathing and make it end with him happlily living with Nicholas *nods head* Or I'll have to cry even more!! *cries for an hour* Now I need to read a happier story!

*shrieked*..YOU ARE EVIL EVIL EVIL EVILL...LITTLE WRITER.! I HATE YOU!...YOU JUST KILLED OFF MY FAVORITE CHARACTER! YOU BETTER UPDATE...! *UNSHEATHES A KNIFE *- OR YOU WILL SOLEMNLY DIE -AFTER YOU TELL ME THE WHOLE STORY FIRST.

o_o... I finally finished reading this... You better be working on part two! --glares-- Then end of this chapter nearly made me cry... ;_;... And Marcel needs to be slapped... >_>...

This story was very good! I like the odd relationship between Alexander and Nicholas. I even liked Allistir. At first I didn't. I don't know why. But towards the time he left, I started to like him. ^_^;

Well, like I said above, I can't wait to read the next part! ^_^

Oh that's just mean! *sobs*

ah! bad bad bad! u are very bad! i should have read this sooner so i could have hit u.yup yup.ur getting hit the next time i see u. yup yup.u are u are.ok bye.^.^

This is good so far

TT damn i'm crying i can't let my family see me like this *wipes tears away and puts fake smile one..sobs..can't do it* WAH this is soo sad. but i'm glad there's more!! two more parts right? HEhe. nicholas and alexander better end up together!! ..but wow what a nice place to end!! oh and HAPPY NEW YEAR! ^^ ...TT i'm crying again...

Wow, I didn't think you'd actually finish it =)

It's sad, but a good chapter nonetheless.