Reviews for Close Your Eyes - FictionPress.com

starlit blade 2004-06-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseHm. Pretty. But what are you going to do with it? There's the question. No room to put it in that head of yours unless you tidy up a bit.
Aftertaste of a Razorblade 2003-01-15 ch 1,	abuseDamn. That's...damn... You're good at this poetry stuff, aren't you?
Karasu Tendo 2003-01-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseI told you on your journal that I liked the poem, I think, but when I saw it up here I had to tell you again. 'Tis very sad, but very beautiful in its sadness. hug Be happy, A.H.!
Slash and Burn [not logged ... 2003-01-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis was so awesome. I loved it!
Accolo ab Renideo 2003-01-12 ch 1,	abuseVery cool. I love it. When you use 1 word in a line really gives it a GREAT touch. Wonderful visual. You've done an awsome job of setting the physical sceane, and of what you're thinking and suffering inside. This is gonna go on my favorites...
cherrymecha 2003-01-12 ch 1,	abuseawesome. great use of metaphors. spacing too. i like how you didn't use caps or punctuation. sets up a good mood. if you change the formation of it slightly, it could be a great song.