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| mispeled 2004-05-18 ch 12,  | abusewow, you seriously have me on the edge of my seat. you better keep writing. |
| mispeled 2004-05-18 ch 11, | abusegeeze, freak inccidents all over the place, im on the edge of me seat. |
| mispeled 2004-05-18 ch 10, | abusehmm, more characters cool, im a little lost cause i haven't read this in a while, but i still like that attitude and flow. |
| Our Lady Of Sorrow 2003-10-29 ch 12, | abuseI love your story. In fact, this is really good. I dunno, the only thing that bothers me is this new kid. For some reason... hmm, let's see. |
| whohasthezebra 2003-07-11 ch 11, | abuseRock on! I love taking back sunday and my cd player is from '97. A lot of action really quickly, though i like that. jayson's blunt, which is refreshing. Looking forward to see how her car crash resolves. |
| drunkpunk 2003-07-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh snap x - yeah it was, but everything changed and I decided I didn't want to continue it as a Good charlotte fic. It never really was, anyway. Just used the character's names. But that's all good. Punks in Drublic - haha yeah, your name's excellent, also. I'll try not to let anything bad happen. |
| infinitas 2003-07-02 ch 2, | abusehmm..was this story originally in the good charlotte section on ff.net? |
| Our Lady Of Sorrow 2003-07-01 ch 11, | abuseNice story. I like it. Keep it up. (hehe, nice sn name. *wink*) and I like TBS too. Anyway, yeah, just don't let anything bad happen to Harley, kk? |
| whohasthezebra (too lazy to... 2003-06-22 ch 10, anon. | abuseWell Stayson is just going to have to suck it up, as Harley seems to have made a new ally...bwahaha. Home ec. I hope thats required, because i really cant imagine stayson making cakes in his spare time. I like the turn this is taking, continue soon! |
| crazee-diamond 2003-06-20 ch 10, | abusebeen a while. Still good though. Nice chapter... and maybe the couple beforehand, I sort of forgot where I was and read the whole thing over again. LoL. *idiot* Rock on! Update soon... |
| whohasthezebra 2003-04-23 ch 9, | abuseAhh, short!! But intriguing. Yay, humanity breaks through for Harley.. Ah hah..bad pun, sorry. This was incredibly short, but very very good. I liked the sudden out lash of anger. I have learned that metal lockers hurt when you punch them. Windows must hurt more. |
| mispeled 2003-04-23 ch 9, | abuseim loving this story and im soo excited that you updated. i can do nothing but wait and watch for the next chapter to be posted. keep it up!! |
| mispeled 2003-03-16 ch 8, | abusethat is really good. . .wow dont stop |
| Kodiak Bear 2003-03-07 ch 8, anon. | abusei like this alot. good job update soon. |
| whohasthezebra 2003-03-06 ch 8, | abuseDun dun dun? im glad that harley finally opened up. I understand the want to bottle it all up, seem cool. this is very well written, and though pessimistic, very true to life. theres a lot to be pessimistic about. |