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| PainKiller 2003-07-18 ch 1, | abuseAmazing ryhmes... you've done a fantastic job. Soft wording really helped the piece out. Awesome work. |
| Poet of Emotions 2003-02-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI took it more as love relationship. Aw! That's sweet too! hehe! I never heared the song, but this is great ::grins:: Me find this special, great job! LUCK! |
| Mara L. Blake 2003-02-01 ch 1, | abuseooooh, i like this poem! just seems... right somehow. :D i promise i'm not going to go all mystical on you. great poem! one thing - in the second to last stanza, the last verse seems just a bit long. i dunno, maybe i'm just reading it with the wrong rhythm or something. all in all, very good! keep writing, ~ mara ~ |
| Fireclaw 2003-01-16 ch 1, | abuseWell this was a nice poem to start out with, has a great beat to it, most poems on fanfic seem to have it. I thought this poem showed how deep friendship can be and shows promise. Maybe lengthing this would make it better. |