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Reviews For: We'll Fly Away

PainKiller
2003-07-18
ch 1,
abuseAmazing ryhmes... you've done a fantastic job. Soft wording really helped the piece out. Awesome work.
Poet of Emotions
2003-02-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseI took it more as love relationship. Aw! That's sweet too! hehe! I never heared the song, but this is great ::grins:: Me find this special, great job! LUCK!
Mara L. Blake
2003-02-01
ch 1,
abuseooooh, i like this poem! just seems... right somehow. :D i promise i'm not going to go all mystical on you. great poem!

one thing - in the second to last stanza, the last verse seems just a bit long. i dunno, maybe i'm just reading it with the wrong rhythm or something.

all in all, very good!

keep writing,
~ mara ~
Fireclaw
2003-01-16
ch 1,
abuseWell this was a nice poem to start out with, has a great beat to it, most poems on fanfic seem to have it. I thought this poem showed how deep friendship can be and shows promise. Maybe lengthing this would make it better.
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