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| Ashley 2005-04-25 ch 1, anon. | abusebaby, you are so deep and intense. When you love someone you give it your all it seems and I am so glad for that! I am happy that I can be here for you to give your heart too. You mean so much to me and I will never ever forget you I will always have you in my life!!Just thought I'd give you my two cents. I love you so much and I don't know where I'd be without you in my life!! |
| daphnegray78 2005-02-06 ch 1,  | abuseWow. Just... wow. This was really deep and moving. ~Daphne~ |
| Clever Fox Cub 2004-06-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is amazing! It's so deep! And the thoughts are so true! You're a wonderful writer! Terrific job here! |
| Repair me 2004-06-01 ch 1, | abusei dont really know what to say.. very meaningfull and it made me feel alittle sad, great style of writting, i love your style -beautifull- |
| Kit-Starwind 2003-02-03 ch 1, | abuseI just got out of a relationship like that, hints my poem. Very nice form I like the way it was written. Very discriptive, and very deep. Thanks for the review. ~Kitten =^,^= a.k.a. Kit |
| New2This 2003-01-13 ch 1, | abuseThis was really deep, dude. I nearly cried...I'm serious! I was reading your other stories that are actually pretty cool too...but I think this is my favorite....you have a gift, don't be afraid to use it!! You can email me sometimes if you want to at: americanwoman70117@yahoo.com....I'll be waiting ^_^ |
| XetherealX 2003-01-13 ch 1, | abuseI hope everything will work out, goodluck. Remember you don't have to sit on the same train forever! |
| Mousie2003 2003-01-13 ch 1, | abuseWow...That was excellent...at first I didn't understand and I thought you were talking about a female/male relationship but then I started browsing the other stuff you wrote...I've been in your position and I'm somewhat still there...being bisexual hurts more I think. I'm sorry you pushed your girlfriend away...I know nothing i can say can fill that void either. |
| CrazyWriter 2003-01-13 ch 1, | abuseI don't know whether or not to review this, becuase I always feel so awkward after reading something this deep. I like this, I really do. It's got this real... I think the word is melancholy feel about it. Not so much as regretful as accepting. Not so much anything but just sad and surrendering. I think this is something anyone can relate to on some level. Bravo. |