Thank you for this. I know it was posted for one particular person, but just reading it helped me.

(Sidethought..: "Forever and Always" caught me off guard, as that is the exact phrase my girlfriend and I use. It's lovely.)
She is who I thought of when I read this, "Thought You Ought To Know".. It echoes my secret fears, how I'll mess up.

I know, it's not a story and not meant to be critiqued, and honestly, how could anyone critique pure, blunt [ :) ] feelings? Thank you, again.
I hope you, too, find your someone.

baby, you are so deep and intense. When you love someone you give it your all it seems and I am so glad for that! I am happy that I can be here for you to give your heart too. You mean so much to me and I will never ever forget you I will always have you in my life!!Just thought I'd give you my two cents. I love you so much and I don't know where I'd be without you in my life!!

Wow. Just... wow. This was really deep and moving.

~Daphne~

This is amazing! It's so deep! And the thoughts are so true! You're a wonderful writer! Terrific job here!

i dont really know what to say.. very meaningfull and it made me feel alittle sad, great style of writting, i love your style -beautifull-

I just got out of a relationship like that, hints my poem. Very nice form I like the way it was written. Very discriptive, and very deep.
Thanks for the review.
~Kitten =^,^= a.k.a. Kit

This was really deep, dude. I nearly cried...I'm serious! I was reading your other stories that are actually pretty cool too...but I think this is my favorite....you have a gift, don't be afraid to use it!!

You can email me sometimes if you want to at: americanwoman70117@yahoo.com....I'll be waiting ^_^

I hope everything will work out, goodluck. Remember you don't have to sit on the same train forever!

Wow...That was excellent...at first I didn't understand and I thought you were talking about a female/male relationship but then I started browsing the other stuff you wrote...I've been in your position and I'm somewhat still there...being bisexual hurts more I think. I'm sorry you pushed your girlfriend away...I know nothing i can say can fill that void either.

I don't know whether or not to review this, becuase I always feel so awkward after reading something this deep. I like this, I really do. It's got this real... I think the word is melancholy feel about it. Not so much as regretful as accepting. Not so much anything but just sad and surrendering. I think this is something anyone can relate to on some level. Bravo.