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| a beginner 2008-03-07 ch 22,  | abusecol |
| Beleg Cuthalion 2003-06-06 ch 20, | abuseAlways part of a larger picture. You're building up very nicely to a conclusion. And if you have no intentions of ending this soon, you're building up many different concepts and the like that would eventually contribute well to a conclusion. A good read, Ceara. -Beleg |
| Beleg Cuthalion 2003-05-16 ch 17, | abuseI love the theological aspect to this story. I know I say it often, but well done. -Beleg |
| Beleg Cuthalion 2003-05-16 ch 16, | abuseThe distraught one always dies. This story is shaping up to be quite the epic. I like the developments. |
| Beleg Cuthalion 2003-05-16 ch 15, | abuseI point my finger at Nakita's parents. Are things all 'back to normal?' |
| Beleg Cuthalion 2003-05-16 ch 14, | abuseI enjoyed this chapter. There's definately intellect flowing between John and Nakita. Enlightening. This part accomplishes more than character development :) -Beleg |
| kriz-te 2003-05-04 ch 17, | abusewow. sorry it took me awhile to get over here and read it. (life is getting in the way again) but wowee. suspensful! who is following his and where did she go? i bet she went to find him...and i cant wait to find out if im right! love it. more please! |
| Della C 2003-04-19 ch 16, | abuseJeyah. that's not fun... well, at least it wasn't Tu. I change my mind. Tu shouldn't die. he is now too cool to die. an' I'll bet he's all immortal and stuff too. |
| Della C 2003-04-19 ch 15, | abusedavid don't talk much, do he? |
| Della C 2003-04-19 ch 14, | abuseWHODUNIT?! |
| Della C 2003-04-19 ch 13, | abuseDid Nakita cast a happy spell in her sleep or something? she be actin' kinda loopy. |
| Della C 2003-04-19 ch 12, | abusewell she-yit. ain't that a monkey? |
| Della C 2003-04-19 ch 11, | abusecuriouser and curiouser... whee |
| Della C 2003-04-19 ch 10, | abuseyou know what I'm gonna say. awesome story and all that jazz. so niftay! I am of the liking! |
| Della C 2003-04-19 ch 9, | abuseaw... cute! is Nakita gonna have a boyfriend? heehee. |