This poem brings back such memories. One of my old friends could have written this to me. Your style is so personal, and even though the content is angsty, there's something strangely comforting about it.

I love this, i really do. the end is the best, very very good work on this one. I love it... emotional yet.. has a certain rythm to it to make it flow, like thought.. innocence and teddy bears.. it's really beautiful Mick. well done and well done to your muse. sos