Wow, i really like this. As a wiccan i am very interested in Deities. i agree with everything you say in this poem, it is very true, I really liek it!. check out my works if you want.

~William~

(nods) that's true. pretty cool, when u think about it.

Very philosophical - and intriguing. Well done.

*nodnod* I agree with this poem. Actually, you want to know what I think? I think that whoever/whatever's out there that decided to make this world happened was bored. Kind of like us, they decided to open an empty notebook and just write, ya know? Only their stories are so much longer and much more detailed. Or it would be like a huge TV show for them. I could picture them laughing their heads off at how stupid we humans are. *le sigh*
But I'll not talk your ear off about my beliefs. I'm sure nobody wants to know or cares about it. I just felt like putting it out there, that's all. In any case, yeah, I agree with this poem. If only certain leaders of CERTAIN countries would read this *hint hint* then maybe they'd regain their senses.
Oh well. I'm babbling, aren't I? Sorry about that, Neko-chan. I'll stop bothering you now. In any case, great, thoughtful poem!

*in deep thought* i never thought of it that way... that's very interesting. i like it!!!

Ahhh so very very true! I love this poem...good job!

Well thought through. Words bringing life to that strange feeling in the back of your mind... When I read, I don't usually notice the words, I notice the things happening and the feelings it raises... This one has a feeling I know so well, that I reach towards whenever possible.