That is sad and quite meaningful. I know where this comes from and I'm sorry. I know nothing about you or your situation, but poems like this don't just materialize out of nothing. It is amazing and poems are a wonderful way to release your feelings.

awesome...I can relate to it very well.

I like it, i know how that feels... but where did you get the inspiration from? saying that at the begining and not telling me is evil... Kinda like something i would have done ^^ anyway, i'd be pleased if you would tell me

I like this! Very emotional. I like the bit about your eyes getting bluer, is that true? I liked the bit at the end, well i don't know about liked cuz it made me sad but I mean it's well written. Good stuff!

*gackchokedie* Well, I don't know where YOU got the inpiration from, but I know where I would have gotten an inspiration from if I wrote a poem like this. My life. *ahem* At any rate, it's well written, and I would say I like it...but...dude... It's creepy.

this is great. i know exactly how you feel. I go through this a lot.