That was a great poem that is so very true... though a lot of the time I think that there are people who don't have those friends who really want to help them. That's one of the things that makes this poem so great, the fact that they don't want to see her end up like she is. Keep up the good work.

-Black Rose

it's very good poem. well-written and true in many cases. This part is my favourite of it,''The young girl, so innocent and pure,so kind, so blind.She wants so much..She doesnt even know why.Emotions so strong, and dreams so large;could be destroyed any second.''but generally I like it all. (take a look into my stuff if you've got a time)