You have described your feelings very well in the poem. Almost every sentence sent a deep feeling of lost and depression into the reader. A good poem although it reflected pessimism. But I'm that kind of a person and so I supposed it's my kind of a poem!

Are you sure you aren't a teensy bit Atheist? It just seemed sort of...atheistic...if that's a word. Good job.

awwwww! this is sad... i no ur feelings here.. i've been describing myself as a shell for quite awhile... u've just finaly been able to put it in the words that i can't... i really like this one.. it reminds me of me... but come on cheer up! i can't let u be sad! i'm the only one whose allowed to be sad . lol i like ur poem alot and ur not allowed to go and die..u must liiive! stay awwwway from the liiight! it burns lol... but nyways.. on a serious note.. i did really like this poem it's very good. can't wait to hear more from u!

always

stregaluna