You write poetry extremely well. I am kinda confused though... Maybe it's all in the interpretation. I'm just not very good at interpreting poetry. Lol. Does 'Colgate' really translate to 'go hang yourself' in Spanish?? Where did you learn this awsome knowledge? Just wondering as I am taking Spanish and that would be a fun thing to spread around the school! Luv yas! byes

DCJ, this was great! I love how you translated Colgate. Very smart!

Beautiful and sad, yet dark and somewhat creepy. I love it, this is awesome!

I generally don't read poetry, but this is ** amazing!

Frighteningly beautiful!!

jkb

OMG! this poem was absolutely wonderful! and I can't write decent reviews... I love it! very much. especially the photo negative part (schools fault, really) and "I am not your reflection in the mirror" and all the other centered (or more to the right) lines. very pretty, all of it... Colgate means "go hang yourself"? coolness, didn't know that... anyway! I really like it! goes straight to the favorites

I am so, so sorry for this terrible review, but I can't think of anything to say except how amazingly excellent it is! (the poem that is...)
Dammit, I can't put into words what I think of it... maybe come back later...
Nessa