great story! just wanted to say that and now i gotta go. my moms screaming about something burning in the kitchen. if you wanna talk email or im me =),
krissa

Very, VERY good... Not many stories I've read have been this good..^^

Very well developed characters, I like the direction you're taking with this story. Looking forward to reading more.

This still rocks! Thanks for the wonderful update! Write more soon!

Oh my gosh this rocks! I've read a lot and this has to be one of the best examples of someone with talent. You're good! Love this scene, but you need to add more before I go insane. I'm so glad I get to be the first reviewer! I can't believe no one else has reviewed, but sometimes people ignore new stories in fear that people won't continue them. That's my theory anyway. This is going on my favorites!