hey my name is dane. u made me sound pretty cool...lol

Seems like a really good start. I'll be checking back for updates. :o)

Can I be the rider that breaks him? JOKING! He's charming and I love it. And Shauna is so cute, I was just want to give her a hug.

Wow, this is a good story too! You're just too talented for your own good. :P Please update this soon, too! You're going to have to start writing a LOT. Mwahahahaaha..

I like I like! Keep writing :)

I think you hsve a good start here its very interesting, and i would like to read more