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| Saranacian Freak 2003-10-26 ch 1,  | abuseExcellent. I love the conclusion. |
| az2328 2003-06-05 ch 1, | abuseThis poem, for some wierd reason, reminded me of confucious.. you know, in volume 23, confucious say:'.. aniwei; it was meant as a compliment; really nice :) |
| Zechariah 2003-05-14 ch 1, | abuseEverything here is very true. Very meaningful. |
| Lady B.V Rose 2003-05-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is SO great! It speaks so well, and the repition of the word 'to' really makes it powerful (please remember that I am 13 [14 tomorrow] so eithics and writing style comments may not make much sense). Thank you for the review, and I shall admit that What about is probably my worst poem so I respect that you had those critisms. x Nicolette x |
| Ranewen Surion 2003-04-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is a good poem too. It is unique, and seems to have alot of thought put into. Nicely done, keep up the good work. |
| Catella Erato 2003-04-04 ch 1, | abuseTis great! I like it a lot! Nice work! ~ Little Dog Muse |
| The Black Rider 2003-03-29 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. A very moving and passionate tale told through poetry. |
| obsidian katana 2003-03-28 ch 1, | abusegreat piece! short, concise, and got the message across well! nicely written! good job on this! i really enjoy your work! keep it up! |
| nimue webweaver 2003-03-23 ch 1, | abusei like this. very powerful, and it makes you think. im in no mood to think but i really liked this. good job |
| Heart of the Sword (FPNET i... 2003-03-22 ch 1, anon. | abuse*nods* Puropse without passion is just motions. ~Heart of the Sword |
| karmakaze 2003-03-21 ch 1, | abuseAre you going to be a professional writer after college? It would be worth persuing in your case, because your writing is very good. |
| Static Black 2003-03-12 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is great! I like it alot. oh, thanks for reviewing my work and about the poem "the good, the bad" I never picked either side. i believe in god and satan I just dont follow either. sorry for the confusion.keep writting |
| Loganberry 2003-02-26 ch 1, | abuseHero's Journey - a Joseph Campbell reference in there, I wonder? Just a thought. Anyway, this all fits together very well. |
| Needa S 2003-02-25 ch 1, | abuseVery meaningful! I like the depth in this piece. Good job! Keep writing.. |
| Familiar Alien 2003-02-02 ch 1, | abuseVery good. Very, very good. My mom thinks so as well. My internet just came back online to! YAY! Ja ne! |