Well good developement with the story so far. After reading more of the journal entries I still say I prefer prose over it. It just allows me to feel if I'm watching it rather than reading about it and plus I find it hard to believe that he's remembering entire conversations and writing them down later, lol. But yeah that's where I stand. Hope you continue with the story soon. Cyaz.

That was perfect, the way you introduced Alisha's character is professional. Thinking of getting this published? You should.

Wow, your characterization so far is amazing, I'm like, captivated. The dream sequences are amazingly detailed.. great work!

Oh wow, I'm so impressed. But you must get that alot. I've got to say that this prologue alone is a great peice of art by a writer.

This is really a nice story. I practically read the entire thing without stop. I prefer the prose over journal so far but you're just getting into the journal so I might change my mind. Keep up the good work. =D

it's great

mwahahahahaha. dreams are repressed feelings. lol.

Pretty good. I'd definatly read it if you continued :)

I'd leave a longer review but I have no time. Longer review next chapter. ^^;

Interesting story, I like this :) A nice break from all the psuedo-depression stuff going about on this site.

Hey! Update soon! KEEP IT UP!!!

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Hey! That's good! Keep it up! UPDATE!!!

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Hey that's good keep it up! Update as soon as you can!

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Wow. Nice. Please continue.

Love it. Keep it going, this story is really good. You can really write-especially that daydream sequence in detention. Update now!!!!
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HAHAHAHA!
Lyle is such a weird dreamer!

Pls continue!