NOW THAT HURTS!! (IF ITS WHAT I THINK IT IS)

I love the last line especially :)

Man, this is a good poem, and it's goin' on my favourites. *clicks add to fav. stories box* ^.^ Keep writing, and try to update "If walls could talk" too!
~Lee~

OUH! Very good. I like that a lot. I can totally understand that one. Though I couldn't explain it so well.

Just one thing about this - "beet" should be "beat". I couldn't help but chuckle at that line because of the typo - I can just see someone getting hit with a beet. XP

Nice work, though! I liked your poem. Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw

oh yes. I 've been here.

Yep, the biggest mistake in life is letting people TRY to understand you. That's why trust is almost always going to be a virtue many lack.

i've been through something just like that. i can totally relate. that's really good. it's exactly how i felt when it happened to me. great poem!
*~claire~*