 alrasha 2004-08-24 . chapter 3(my computer is acting up, i wanted to make sure my review was posted)
I too share your admiration, if not obsession of the Greek Gods.
Bravo on an excellent story. |
 zach of waxhaw 2003-09-15 . chapter 17That was a good story.
You should do one on Athena |
 Jenza 2003-06-29 . chapter 17Talk about an abrupt ending! Ah well, it's your call. Pretty good story, keep up the good work ^_~ |
 midzen 2003-06-25 . chapter 17Heehee...good story...has a nice sweet ending. Garret, I'd say, was being a bit cocky...but eh, what else can one who's in love with a Goddess do? You have great writing skills so keep up the great work! |
 jeanne 2003-06-11 . chapter 16 not bad not bad. i like mythology, and this is an interesting take. update soon! |
 Sabriel4 2003-04-29 . chapter 15An enjoyable update, Rachelmorph...
So... he's passed the first test, but now comes the tough stuff; how to tell Diana! (Can't say I envy him that... how do you tell a goddess she's a goddess... literally?) ^^*
Good luck with the inspiration, update soon, and all that jazz...
Sabriel |
 Rizu McButt 2003-04-25 . chapter 15Oh! Nice! Another few chapters, nicely done! Can't wait to read the rest... keep it up! |
 Jenza 2003-04-23 . chapter 15Yay!! You updated :) so I'm guessing the next chapter's the meeting and another cliff-hanger. |
 Sabriel4 2003-04-14 . chapter 14o... hardly a "dumb mortal" now.
Good for Garrett... although I kinda think he found their secrets out a bit fast, it will move the plot along at the same time. I'm enjoying your work, Lady... I hope you keep updating.
Sabriel |
 Jenza 2003-04-13 . chapter 14That's just cruel to end the chapter there! |
 midzen 2003-04-12 . chapter 12Ep! No! You can't stop the story now! It's so good! I really like how you incorporated all the gods and what they did, must have taken a lot of research! Please hurry with the next chapters! |
 Jaden Anderson 2003-04-05 . chapter 12Ok, I am caught up now, this is a very intruiging stories but I think it is a lil cruel of the sisters! lol.. :Þ Keep it up! |
 Jaden Anderson 2003-04-04 . chapter 1Oh my my my... I just love mythology! and having gone through fanfiction to now fictionpress, I hadn't even seen the mythology section! I can't believe its actually here, and then there's ur story, which is great so far!! I can't wait to read more then the first chapter, but just not able to tonight. I love how you get into their heads and describe them... its great! anyways, keep up the great work!
~*Jaden Anderson*~ :Þ |
 Jenza 2003-04-02 . chapter 12Carry on soon, I'm dying to know what happens next!! |
 A. Jacelyn 2003-04-01 . chapter 11Wonderful twist! I agree with whom ever said that paragraphs would be a nice addition. It would make the story easier to read, but the content itself it wonderful. Soul mates, huh? Well, don't keep us waiting, write! |