Awesome, I liked it a lot. Sometimes I wonder how it would be if he was still alive...well, if he saw what was going on with music today, he'd probably kill himself. I know sometimes I feel that way (when I look at miss Lavigne for instance). I loved the last line, it's awesome. Good job, keep writing.
luvs RIP K. Cobain
Young'n'HopelessKid

awesome... i love the last line. about the nursury rhyme thing - do you have any that you could recommend for me to rewrite? just wondering. once again, great poem.

*sniffles* it was so sweet! *hugs*

Interesting poetry- I can't write poetry for anything. I liked the Kurt one the best. What surprised me was that after Kurt shot himself all the other people at school began to like Nirvana? I didn't get that, and it gave me the poos.

Luv Aims :)

your poems are NOT crap ass! :\

RIP Kurt Cobain

I like this poem, especially the part where he colors outside the lines, a "troubled mind."

Wow, someone liked my poem! THANK YOU! ::grovels and bows at your feet::

- Alex

awwww, that is really sweet, v well written.