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| Moonwinges 2003-03-06 ch 1,  | abuseI like this poem a lot, although I think you shouldn't have tried to make it rhyme. The rhymes seemed forced, and some words didn't actually rhyme at all ("again" and "insane"). I like it a lot though - everyone wants to be discovered and famous. ^_^ |
| Lli 2003-02-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseStupendous! Kind of eerie and creepy and at the same time very understandalbe. Great work! |
| Lli 2003-02-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseStupendous! Kind of eerie and creepy and at the same time very understandalbe. Great work! |
| Bri and Her Squirrel 2003-01-29 ch 1, | abusealright, for some reason your HP review button wouldn't load on this computer! darn it! oh well, I read that and this, and both were good, if you want to read more of my stuff... go to my real account, BriDee, it has Marauder's Plot... Think About It AND some other good stories, an, S*WITCHED! and MIS*PLACED!, it's my Hermy/Draco fic, and my baby... hehehe, anyway, I don't reccomend reading the reviews on some of them, because just recently my BETA was, with no better words, a ** and uploaded an illigitimate story... so yeah, i've been dealing with that allllllll day today, so go ahead and read, ill all try to read somemore of your stuff tomorrow! ~*BRI*~ |
| EnigmaDesdemona7 2003-01-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful! I loved! I could feel the words in myself, I could feel what you were saying. I like how it all flows so wonderfully... Great job! |
| Lothe 2003-01-21 ch 1, | abuseYou should stop reading our collective mind, it's frightening. You are right, though, the poem rather nicely encapsulates the writer's neuroses about his or her own work...no doubt everyone here has experienced this to more or less a degree *grin* ~Lothe |
| QuillKitten 2003-01-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is my favorite of yours!! It's like you can't wait to be discovered you have to keep trying. But you have the doubts that are stated in the first and second stanza. I like the analogy to the unsown seeds. Very cool. This was also nicely written, and had a simple symbolicness to it that made it like a lesson. I loved this, keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |