where's our chapter 12?? i'm really loving the story so far!!

Nice story,please update soon.

mary-sue, i see u :D

hmm...you need a beta to go through to check for spelling mistakes and grammatical mistakes and such.. but other than that...quite interesting.. you're on my alert list

Very interesting...Update soon! : )

great story update soon!

I like this!! Who are you paring Aurpra with?
Ples more son!
Shard

omg.. soo good! please do update soon!! VERY SOON *hinthint*

It's definitely a good story. The typos were quite dostracting, though. You might want to have someone beta it for you to fix the problems or maybe just go over it yourself. Other than that, I love it!

I'm so glad that you didn't forget about this story. How could you lose interest when it's coming along so well?? Yup, definitely one of my favorites!:)

there were a lot of typos, but that's okay. that's creepy. I would be freaking out if that happened to me, witht he parents and everything. I'm mad at her! How could she not go after Laim!? sure, I see where she's coming from, but still. You have to update soon!
~Mel

Omg that chapter was really good! I wonder why her parents were screaming her name like that...Update soon! : )

now, if that ain't suspenseful, i don't know what is. i really hate cliffies. anywayz, great story so far. can't wait to read more. update soon!

Where did you go? Please come back!

wow I love this! It's a great story idea! You have to update it soon! Please! Lol