your stories were so good i read the whole series 3 times, keep up the good work

this is really good why haven't you updated in 3 years

cool! please update soon!

That CAN'T be it! thats like giving a crack addict a little crack and then taking the rest away! agh either way all three books were awesome even if i dont think the 3rd is quite finished yet... your a great writer and i will continue to read your works as well as reccomend your writings to my friends thank you for keeping me entertained for the past couple of days :D

seriously, you need to finish this. i mean it. it's too good to waste.

Wow. This is a great story and a great trilogy. I read all three in two days. I just can't get enough! Update soon please.

you need to finish this

I LOVE this series! It is so well written! Its obvious you've done alot of research because of all the facts you know about all the different guns and stuff. this is the perfect action shoot-em-up sort of thing i've looked for. i read the first two and adored them so i went ahead and started reading this one. this is so good!

ooh, military drama! sounds great, now i need to read the first two. anyway, i wanted to reply to your review. i wanted the readers to get to know the characters as Sebastian does, so i left out a lot of detail in the descriptions of everyone. what do you think? you were right about the setting, though. thanks. i appreciate some constructive criticsm. :-)

Great chapter. I love the story you've develpoed. This could deffinitely be a blockbuster movie. later.

Terrific as always!!

small spelling error I noticed: "secrete" should be "secret".

Everything else is perfect.

Keep writing that action please! :)
~DA

well, your book WOULD END THERE. the missile would have killed them. A CHOPPER IS NOWHERE NEAR FAST ENOUGH TO EVEN MAKE A TURN IN THE STICK B4 THE MISSILE WOULD HAVE HIT. a hand held rocket launcher is acceptable, BUT A SEEKING ONE!

I'm waiting for the next chapter(s)

I like your style of writing & your stories. How's that? You wanna be good and update now?...

wow! Awesome story man! I stumbled on the first one! It was prety cool! I'm waiting for the nexct chatper!

oh wow! I didnt expect this to be out so soon! But i am happy it is. This chapter was awesome, it jumped straight into the action! This is like Behind Enemy Lines(The movie.) These peopple are stuck behind enemy lines and will need to get out! Pretty cool, I was wondering how long willt his story be? Well write more soon, i'll be waiting for the next chapter!