   Nickolaus Pacione 2004-02-29 . chapter 3This one is very well written. Very cerebral in the delivery. |
 ShAdOwPuPpEt 2003-07-04 . chapter 3that was freaky!~! yet, really cooll... |
 AimzNemesis, Sadistic Scorpion 2003-02-27 . chapter 3Wow, this is creepy, and very, very good indeed. I was loving the gory scene in the last chapter (I have a morbid facination with gore, please don't ask me why). I love the way you add such twists to the ends of your stories. =)
Nice job. |
 hashire 2003-02-02 . chapter 3Wow. Very...twisted. The doll house part was kind of confusing. The idea could have been embellished (I can't think of the word that I want to say...it just isn't coming to me) more, and then it would have been easier to understand.
All in all, though, very good story. |
 Carbon Slash 2003-01-27 . chapter 3wow...an unexpected ending... |
 BlueBliss 2003-01-25 . chapter 3Wow, a wonderful twist at the end. A great evil sinister story. I'm glad I read it. Keep it up! |
 musings-of-a-crazy-dyke 2003-01-24 . chapter 3thanx SOOO much for puting up the new chpter. that was so good, but i didnt get what the doll house was. maybe i'm just dumb. oh well. |
| musings-of-a-crazy-dyke 2003-01-23 . chapter 1 GAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!its a really good story, but a clif hanger!!!!!!!!MOOOO!!!!!!can you email me when you have pt. 3 up? my email is jenn_666_777@yahoo.com. please get the new chaper up soon!!!! .^_^. bye |
 freezing-thesun 2003-01-23 . chapter 2Uh... ? It's kind of disturbing, but the more disturbing, the better! FINISH IT!!!! *Roar* I think i might add you to my favorite author list... but only when you finish this story!!! |
| Carbon Slash 2003-01-23 . chapter 2 hee...i can't wait for the next chapter.. |
| BlueBliss 2003-01-22 . chapter 2 Great story! I love it, and great graphic images...please email me when you post the last chapter. My address is jungle6087@yahoo.com
Thanks, and post soon! |
| BlueBliss 2003-01-22 . chapter 1 Ok, this is gonna be quick, because I want to read the next chapter. Wonderfully creepy and scary...I love your imagery! Great start! Now, on to the next chapter! |
 hip-hoppa12 2003-01-21 . chapter 1 You're evil! Hurry up and update! I hate cliffhangers! Conitnue. *Peace* |
| Willie 2003-01-21 . chapter 1 I take it by the "(or move onto the next chapter if it's up)" that this story isn't over? I really think that this would be good by itself. Of course, I haven't read the rest-- you may have a nigh novella going on here dealing with a crazed fan. However, leaving it like this, I really like the ambiguosity of the ending. One thing though-- how do you tell a meat blender from any other type of a blender? Just curious ;-) |
| alexis 2003-01-21 . chapter 1 oh come on. not a cliffhanger. more mor more i say more !!!!! =) |
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