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| SpawnMeister666 2007-02-16 ch 8,   | This is a good tale, well developed characters, good pace, well written all round. I'm looking forwards to an update sometime soon. Spawny |
| ct 2004-03-03 ch 8, | hey this is a really great story! when are you going to continue it? |
| Jen 2003-07-29 ch 8, | This story is great. It was the 1st I read on fictionpress.com Please continue with it. |
| madfrog 2003-07-09 ch 8, | I'm not sure if I've already reviewed this. But even if I have it's worth a second review. I love it. 'Nuff said. |
| paco 2003-06-30 ch 1, | hey **. im only writing this so i can get a comment. well anyway, great chapter one. ::hump:: |
| i dont know 2003-06-25 ch 1, | really good story i wish u were to keep writing but if u dont have inspiration then dont becaus then itd start to suck so do what u please |
| girlpunk51 2003-05-16 ch 8, | i cant belive!! chapter 8 is up!! finally(hehehehe) well it rules... devin is so sweet! watching the sunset. you rock! keep writting please!! |
| tiffany 2003-05-10 ch 8, | great great great. i dont know what exactly to write here. um...it was a cute story, and i hope i find love like that one day. g'night. |
| BoOgEr 2003-05-08 ch 8, | hey kim. ok i finally reviewed. sorry it took me so long but i was busy but ur my gurl n i found time.. great story. ur very talented!! cant wait for chapter 9!! |
| AMBRINA 2003-05-05 ch 8, | GOOD CHAP NEED MORE COURTNEY! :) |
| Chelsey 2003-04-30 ch 8, | Kimmy...i love it its great but damn girl the words they are using remind my of last year when me,you, and alex would talk ..hehe good times good times dont you think..hehe well i guess me is going to go I LOVE YOU! hehe ::poke: |
| Nickchick 2003-04-28 ch 8, | I like this chapter a lot. The characterization of Nessa and Devin really develops in this chapter and I love the chemistry between them. One suggestion... their relationship seems to be moving a bit fast. They only met a week ago and now they're talking about soulmates? But anyway, great dialogue and please update soon. |
| MyMy 2003-04-28 ch 8, | *faints* wait, you actually updated, I don't believe it. Maybe I'm halucinating, eh whatever, great chapter. Can't wait for the next one. |
| Beefy 2003-04-28 ch 8, | Yes, It is I... the One, the Only, BEEFY. LOL* Loved the chapter Biznitch... and i still love you even though your slow ** doesn't write that often. Anyway... great chapter... loved the hookin up that went on... F-i-n-a-l-l-y! LOL* Oh, but one last thing...You can't say worship me...that's MY THING... I am the only one that can be worshiped... ME DAMMIT ME! but i still luv ya! |
| maybry 2003-04-28 ch 8, | mos def worth the wait. Good job kiddo. |