This is a fantastic and complicated story!

Whoa, wow... I love it! Dang, that's sad parts and I don't like the chapter three (for a reason, I can't stand child deaths, hah ^_^).
I wish you complete this story so I will know what happen to Len! Still,that's so awesome to read it! :D

*Adding to my fave stories list*

wow. crazy, crazy stuff. but very good nonetheless. it's written excellently, the language fits, and these last few chapters were really original. especially Honnor. just the image in my mind is creepy, gross...SUPERB! i really hope you update soon. i just happened to stumble upon this story, and i'm very glad i did. great job, PLEASE alert me when you update again!

FINALLY! Still good, still good. *cheers* Keep going!

Whoa! That was soo spooky and you stopped on this chapter in March 2003? *sigh* I suppose I'll never find out what happened now, but I'll keep you on my list for a month or two just in case you decide to update. I really want to know what happens. Plus, this is my first story ever reading about the main character being so evil lol.

*blinks* What? Who are these new...creatures? They just appeared out of nowhere, hmm very, interesting.

A child's death... Well I can take reading a man or woman's death, but a child's death is always very disturbing, especially the gruesome way you had her die. What's wrong with you? Despite that part, as a writer's point of view to another this is still a very interesting story. You've showed me just how cruel a vengeful mermaid can be. Can't wait to find out if she will find her son and what's happened to him in the sea.

*shivers* Wow, she's evil. I can understand how she feels in a way being bound to a man she hated and having to bare his children, but sheesh, the woman or mermaid didn't have to be so mean to her kids since it wasn't there fault they were born, but I suppose all she can think about is getting revenge on the man that had captured her. Well, she's definitely not human so I guess I wouldn't expect her to act like one as far as morals and emotions. After all she did kill all those men for own pleasure. I like this story alot. You're keeping her in character and I like that.

Wow, I loved the first chapter so far. Mermaids are one of my favorite fantasy characters and I've never read one like this. It's quite refreshing to read the dark side of a mermaid story instead of the sappy, romantic ones even though I liked those too. LOL.

And to think I used to like mermaids...Update soon, por favor!

o_O

Wow. Very gory and disturbing. I don't think I'll look at mermaids the same way again.

Wow, great GREAT writing. The description is amazing, and the details of Mers emotions, though cold, are justified. I love how you don't shy away from the obscene or the gore, and that makes you a strong writer, very bold. Keep up the great work. Your story is twisted, but in a cool way that keeps me captivated.

This is an amazing story, and wonderfully well written. I look forward to seeing how you continue it. Amazing, simply amazing.

-Nika

EEK! X_X This is...hoo boy. This is disturbing. Which is why it's wonderful. It just blows my stuff out of the water. ^^; If that was a pun, ignore it. If it wasn't, then, um..right. *can never distinguish puns* Please, please PLEASE finish this! So wonderfully disurbing! (And well-written to boot.)

~fellow review junkie/Rura

keep posting please!!