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| Anumati 2003-02-12 ch 1,   | I love the characters Earl and Shelty! Congrats on doing a sci-fi about average joes -- people tend to go after the ultra-brilliant, warrior-type people. It gets old after a while. Can't find anything wrong with this except that there's no drive in the plot yet. I like the rat-hunting idea (kinda similar to fishing... "It was thiiiis big I tell yah, thiiiis big..."). I'll return to read more if I get the chance. |