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| Knightmare Elite 2005-07-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was an excellent piece dealing with cutting. You clearly give a reason as to why it happed, also the depth of emotion beind it, that's something most people ignore. They see it as just a fetish many 'extreme' people partake in. I know you don't SI anymore but I still wanted to say how good this is. Thanks for sharing your experiences and reasoning behind them. |
| Sherwin 2004-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is sad. But a very good piece of work. You remind me a lot of a character called Juri from Utena(anime). Don't give up hope yet. Looking forward to reading your other works. ;) |
| It was not enough 2003-11-29 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! Love it alot! just recently Ive been through this and I agree dreams never come true but at least it was fun living the dream for awhile right? very good work keep it up I wanna see how your situation ends up |
| ex-angel 2003-10-13 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is so sad! don't give up on love! you'll find the right person eventually. |
| Unfinished Author 2003-06-18 ch 1, | abuseaww, this is very moving, a true insight into your feelings and cares i like the way you kept refurring to it as a dream, it gave it a certain edge that made you keep reading. V. well done. |
| Mackenzie Anderson 2003-05-23 ch 1, | abuseOkay, chills. My first girlfriend broke up with me after 4 months, after I slept with her she left me for her best friend... it -hurt- so damned deeply. Beautiful interpretation of such an event... |
| Sapphire Tears 2003-01-21 ch 1, | abuseYou know that crappy old saying everyone hates but knows is true... "You have to put up with the storm in order to get a rainbow." Just think of it this way: she cared enough for you to take away the blade. No matter what happens between you guys, any person who was ever that close to you would take another one away. That shows the dream will never be completely over, right? Erm... hope this made you feel better. And if it just sounds like I began rambling non stop again, sorry. |
| crazee-diamond 2003-01-21 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is incredible. Makes you realize just how ** up people who "love you" can be. bah... I'm angry now. but hey "You may be a cutter, but there's always neo-sporin." my friend made that up. i think she meant it in the emotional way tho. I don't know... well this review was pretty long and filled with things i'm sure you didn't really want to know, so sorry.... |
| CrazyWriter 2003-01-21 ch 1, | abuseVery deep and very... agressive, I think is the word I'm going for. The voice of this comes off to me not so much as bitter but angry. Hence, I like it. Very good. |