Hits me on a very low level, which is actually a good thing, cause it just goes BOOM into my subconcious. This is really really good, really easy to relate to. It feels almost surreal, yet so very realistic, very emotional. Very good, to say the least, I like it!

Sometimes I feel like a ghost both invisible and insubstantial...*shakes head* anyways great job on the poem. It's very sad but beautiful. ^_^