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| starlit blade 2004-06-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell, if you're broken still, I could lend you my duck tape. Duct tape. Whatever. |
| Lauren 2003-04-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like this one. It reminds me of an emptiness I once held inside of me. While silence fills your thoughts, voices fill mine. Of "what ifs" and " who cares" , of loneliness when I'm not alone, of people and places I wish would cease , I wish would stay. I like how you say no one must know. But now I know. I remember when I thought it too. You drift in and out of it like tides that pull you under by their string whenever they want to tugg at your heart, your mind. It hurts. My string's still tied, but it seems to have grown weak with me. yes, I really like this one. |
| Aftertaste of a Razorblade 2003-01-21 ch 1,  | abuseWow. Breathtaking. 'i can't cry to the heavens without tge angels hearing' Wow! |
| The Postmodern Prometheus 2003-01-21 ch 1, | abuseGood but very depressing. |
| DefianceIsMe 2003-01-21 ch 1, | abuseThe formatting was interesting as was the message it conveyed. I enjoyed the piece. GJ ^_^ |